Now I don't mind reading a lot but a story told from the perspective of someone remembering his past doesn't leave much for the player to do. Honestly, I wouldn't even call this a 's a picture book. That is something you never want to be said about a game but unfortunately, it's just that. Personally I would either add in the sex scene or I would omit the dialogue mentioning the sex scene. It's not that big of a plot hole, but considering how much detail the Dev put into the Prologue and considering most Dev's don't usually omit obvious sex scenes in an adult VN, I was confused why this wasn't included. It could have happened in the few months between when the MC beat up that kid at school and when he got back together with Rachel. But then the MC kills her and there was no story of times when the MC was with Jakeline and they had sex. Some of it can be fun, but i felt like I would be emersed in the story and then get sucked back out by the Dev addressing you directly too frequently.Īnother part the confused me is - at one point the MC recalls how Jakeline hits him him the head with her gun one time when he was screwing her, when he called her Jakeline. My only small criticism is the Dev interacts with the player/reader a little too much. The models are hot and the renders and animations are well done. I assume this will continue and carry through in the updates. I do like that the choices you make change the dialogue and seem to matter.
Obviously there aren't going to be many choices in a Prologue, as you are replaying past memories. Sure the Prologue is really long, but the Dev mentions that up front and advises for you to skip it if you aren't interested.
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